Revise and edit this essay: when one is hurt mentally or physically a dog will be there to comfort you because it is loyal like one should be. Us humans should do the same and follow the dog’s example of loyalty. It is important to be loyal in life because it allows people to trust you especially in relationships and it allow you to have more opportunities. It tells people one is loyal, and trust is key in all relationships. When Alexander and his friend Garrett went six flags Alexander went on a rollercoaster with Garrett, so Alexander was filled with anxiety he had to trust Garret that the ride was not going to be that bad. Alexander trusted his friend Garrett and he had a lot of Fun because Garrett was loyal and held up his words. Alexander had so much fun he wanted to ride the roller coaster again and Garret had Alexander’s trust.
When one is loyal, they have opportunities that test that loyal and sometimes you may get rewarded for that loyalty. When Alexander gets in trouble, he must show his parents that he is loyal and trustworthy. He earns stuff back whenever he behaves and gives them a reason to let him earn things back, he shows them loyalty like a person should, so they give him the opportunity to trust him. Since Alexander shows them, he is loyal he earns trust and trustworthy he can get rewarded but not always does he get rewarded for good behavior. But he still earns trust back.
loyalty is a necessity in life it will always be around so do not abuse it. Loyalty can help one or be one’s demise they must earn loyalty so prove that one deserves it. If we did not have loyalty, we would fall into a dark cloud of betrayal and we would not trust anyone and we would have no relationships and have a for one’s self situation.