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English, 08.11.2020 23:00 lizdeleon248

Please help me please this is urgent I'm having trouble This submission should contain:

1. An original version of one of your body paragraphs with the area(s) you plan to revise highlighted.

2. The revision of that paragraph with the revised area(s) highlighted. Remember that the revision must include your combining two sentences from the original paragraph to create a compound-complex sentence that demonstrates syntax variety and maturity. You should also look for and remove any instance of passive voice. If you did not have any passive voice in your original submission, then just note that in your reflection.

3. A reflection explaining the revisions you made and how they strengthen the paragraph.

my original paragraph
Is there any positive affect playing video games? Of course, physiologists use video games to cure children and adults. How? They use games to help them with different types of disorders such as attention-deficit, hyperactivity, and also with brain injuries. In fact, Games help people with cancer to destroy bad cells and protect them. “Some therapists use games to treat people with brain injuries or learning disabilities. One game allows cancer patients to destroy harmful cells and shield themselves from the effects of chemotherapy."

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