Write an essay explaining why it is important to be loyal in your life. Use these guidelines for planning and writing:
• You MUST complete the graphic organizer to help you organize the information. This
is required and worth 10 points.
• Clearly state your thesis
• Organize and develop your ideas effectively, having a main idea and supporting
details.
• Write your essay in third person point of view
• Choose your words carefully
• Edit your writing for grammar, mechanics, and spelling
• Restate your thesis in your conclusion

1- cleans/ tidies up

2- were

3-would be

4- had known

5-takes

6-must be/ have to be/should be

i think you should write from the heart and think what truely makes a hero. i can’t do this for you. even though this is it’s up to you.

from the political point of view it could be said that the candidate   is an effective speaker because she takes a strong position on the issue. it is an open discussion but probably she is making a presentation and can choose which subjects she wants to address. she is very likely to attain her aim which is to convince voters to accept her proposal.

answer: c

explanation: because it has a dangling   construction error. hope this !