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Salva dut poem

A wise boy named Salva lived in Africa, handling a hard past with the tribe carrying pride.
Hoping to see his loved ones at least just once.
Into a new life with a new light. Describes the life of dull eyes.
Saved and raised money for Africa for clean water that surprised her and
applauded him.