What is the best way to revise the sentence to eliminate wordiness and keep the same meaning?

the wedding of the bride and groom that was held in a local park was interrupted by an unexpected rainstorm, which drenched the wedding party and the guests.

choices
a the bride and groom of the wedding were drenched in a local park by a sudden rainstorm.

b an unexpected rainstorm drenched everyone in a local park.

c a wedding held in a local park was ruined for the bride, her groom, and their guests.

da rainstorm interrupted a wedding in a local park, drenching everyone attending.

D. A rainstorm interrupted a wedding in a local park, drenching everyone attending.

Explanation:

The sentence "The wedding of the bride and groom that was held in a local park was interrupted by an unexpected rainstorm, which drenched the wedding party and the guests" talks of the wedding that was interrupted by the unexpected rainstorm which resulted in everyone getting drenched. So, the correct way to rewrite the whole sentence, while keeping in mind to not miss any detail, but still retain the whole story is option (D).

ich statement best shows a problem in travels with charley?

one sharp difficulty presented itself. in the intervening twenty-five years my name had become reasonably well known.

this being so, my trip demanded that i leave my name and my identity at home.

i had to go alone and i had to be self-contained, a kind of casual turtle carrying his house on his back.

with all this in mind i wrote to the head office of a great corporation which manufactures trucks.

the legal limit for the drivers who can drive after consuming any amount of alcohol is 21 years.

explanation:

on november 1, 1996, a "zero tolerance law" was put into effect in the new york state.

according to this zero tolerance law, for people under the age of 21 years, it was illegal to purchase and possess alcohol or to drive after consuming any amount of it.

also, the alcohol involvement rate for the drivers under the age of 21 was roughly twice that of elderly drivers.