I need help girls can you check my poem pls its a love poems I made A million stars up in the sky one shines brighter I cant deny
A love so precise a love so true a love that comes from me to you
The angles sing when you are near
In your arms I got nothing to fear
Talking to you makes my day
Your the only girl that makes me smile
And together forever never to part

Hi its amazing but try to use more words

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They r gonna be great like u :)

It's really good! Just change angles to angels in line 5 and your to you're in line 8.

b i think or maybe d

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you can change by someone having a negative opinon of you in many ways for example thi can lead to depression and taking of ones life also known as sucide this effects there self esteem and ego in a negative way making them feel sad depressed and stressed causing them to act gloomy and sad if this continuses this can lead to self harm or much worse things.

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