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English, 23.10.2020 08:01 micro7909

. Instead of the informal 'I have read', use ( . The phrase 'turn out to be' is informal. Ins
Instead of 'paid for', use ( given, funded)
Job' is a little too informal. Instead write (
Instead of 'funny' use (laughable, ironic)
Instead of 'picked out', use selected, tak
Rather than “stand for" write (be, repres
The term 'music fans' is informal. Instead
s a substitute for 'killing', use ( assassin Ed

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