Continue this story: Yesterday, she stopped screaming- all that remained was the silence.

you will need:

a clear beginning, middle and end
paragraphs to show change in time, topic, place or person
connectives
sophisticated vocabulary
similes
metaphors
personification
a range of punctuation, including speech punctuated accurately

Yesterday, she stopped screaming- all that  remained was the silence. She was sitting there, in aboslute despair, trying to find a sufficient object to cut out of the thick ropes she was tied up in. The basement was steaming hot, her face was sweating profusely and the sweat droplets were running down her face. The man left a glass of water to tease the girl, the glass was screaming, "Drink Me!", to her, but there was nothing she could do. Her tounge was like a desert, dry with absolutely no moisture. As the girl was looking around, trying to find some type of object to cut out of the ropes, she heard the triumphant footsteps of the man strolling down to the basement corridor. She panicked, she screamed for help, begging for mercy. The man came down and held a knife in his hand holding it in a hostile manner. By seeing this sight, the girl fainted. She wakes up from her bed, and is sweating. "It was just a dream."

Explanation:

c) eager anticipation.