The best way to improve this thesis is to include the topic being discussed. clearly take a side. express a viewpoint. cite the source of the study.

Hello. This question is incomplete. The full question is:

Parents should, if they choose, limit the amount of television their children are viewing.

The best way to improve this thesis is to

include the topic being discussed.

express a viewpoint.

clearly take a side.

cite the source of the study.

express a viewpoint.

Explanation:

The author could enrich the thesis written by him, concisely expressing his point of view on the subject. In this way, the author positions himself on the theme and already establishes how this subject will be addressed in the work and how the evidence presented will be to reinforce the author's point of view.

as an example, the author could write his thesis as follows:

"Parents should, if they want, limit the amount of television that their children watch. Since they should be responsible for the content that children are consuming and should encourage more profitable, recreational activities that stimulate reasoning, movement and growth of the children's minds. "

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