Describe a time when you discovered or experienced something that made you see the world differently. How did this make you feel? How did it cause you to change?

The first time when I saw the flood in my town

Explanation:

The first time when I saw the flood in my town

There is one situation in my life that made me change up my mind about many things and it made me respect everyone around me more than I did. It was one September night and because it was still warm outside we were laughing and drinking outside near the sea. Suddenly, it started to rain and I never thought that I would see the flood that night but I did. I had great luck because I saved myself and my family from the flood. I was feeling so scared because of it and I started to question myself every day. It causes a change in me because now I am grateful every day for what I still have.

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

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so really, having people prompting to apply to a university is so the college can get more information about that person.

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