Directions: Read "Just keep Folding" Again and answer the following questions. Remember to fill out the entire space and erase the lines.
1) Read the first sentence of the essay again. How does it grab your attention?
2) What "vivid, detailed story" does the author tell?
3) Which paragraphs is the "pivot"?
What did the author learn about herself from folding cranes?
4) Which paragraph is the "glow"?
How does it leave "a lasting impression for the reader"?

What is the best revision of this statement from the body of a cover letter?

Read the thesis statement below and answer the question that follows. the life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent in many different areas. how can this thesis statement be improved?

Which statement best describes the effect of the metaphor on the excerpt's meaning? o a. it compares the sloshing liquid to a river of water able to push apart the sidewalk o b. it makes the frozen crystals seem like friends to the city to contrast with what a deceitful foe they are. o c. it compares the frozen crystals to delicately lacy snowflakes having arn unexpected strength o d. it likens h20 molecules to hexagonal crystals, which are actually larger than people imagine.