Hello, could could you guys help me revise my revise my paragraph. Doesn't have to be a crazy amount of changes, just pick out better and make it sound smart :D The Komodo Dragon is an incredibly strong animal that poses a huge threat to the villagers of an Indonesian town. Some background information on the Komodo dragon is that they are a massive reptile, according to the article Komodo Dragon “The imposing giant Komodo dragons reach a length of up to 10 feet (3 meters) and weigh approximately 300 pounds (135 kilograms).”. The dragon also has a lot of physical strength and adaptions so they can gobble up their prey, the source Komodo Dragon states “Their large flexible skulls are adapted to accommodate the large chunks of flesh that these animals gulp down. Their powerful jaws are equipped with about 60 razor-sharp, serrated teeth that are replaced quite often.”. All these features make the Komodo dragon more dangerous to the villagers. The dragon has injured and killed many humans before which terrifies the villagers.

The Komodo Dragon is an incredibly strong animal that poses a huge threat to the villagers of an Indonesian town. The Komodo dragons are a massive reptile, dragons reach a length of up to 10 feet and weigh around 300 pounds. The dragon also has a lot of physical strength and adaptions so they can gobble up their prey, they have adapted for where they are. All these features make the Komodo dragon more dangerous to the villagers. The dragon has injured and killed many humans before which terrifies the villagers.

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The Komodo Dragon is an incredibly strong animal that poses a huge threat to the villagers of an Indonesian town. Some background information on the Komodo dragon is that they are a massive reptile, according to the article Komodo Dragon “The imposing giant Komodo dragons reach a length of up to 10 feet (3 meters) and weigh approximately 300 pounds (135 kilograms).”. The dragon also has a lot of physical strength and they can gobble up their prey, the source Komodo Dragon states “Their large flexible skulls are adapted to accommodate the large chunks of flesh that these animals gulp down. Their powerful jaws are equipped with about 60 razor-sharp, serrated teeth that are replaced quite often.”. This makes the Komodo Dragon a frightening creature to villagers.

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orwell was frustrated by his position due to constant teasing by the burmese people.

explanation: smple

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)