Rewrite the sentences below to make them more concise. I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator, Dr. Lomas, towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items drafted for her signature or approval, as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies. Please encourage your section to keep their sentences short.

Explanation:

I would appreciate it if you would bring to the attention of your drafting officers the dislike of the administrator. Dr. Lomas has drafted for her signature or approval towards long sentences and paragraphs in messages to the field and in other items. She also did it as well as in all correspondence, reports, and studies.

This is the direct tone that is more concise than the long sentence from your answer. There are three shorter sentences that are considering independent clause.

a myth is something that is told for many years that u go looking for and cant find and a truth is something that u can find in real life and can be story's of for example:

mermaid's and unicorns: u can't find them at all so they can be a myth cause u hear story's about them once u go looking for them u won't find them.

dinassours(can't spell): u hear story's about them at school by ur friends and one day ur dad takes u to a museum and u find fossils of them so u realize they are real and not fake.

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i think i seen this before