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The language used in the article “To Those Who Keep Slaves, and Approve the Practice” by Richard Allen is persuasive to the reader due to the use of the appeals because it appeals to the fear for god knowing their wrongdoings and will punish them for such.

For example in the passage, it says, “That God who knows the hearts of all men, ” (para. 5).

The evidence contributes to the overall effectiveness because it appeals to the authority of God when imploring them to know that God sees their hearts and that of all men.

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When you go to the writing center for identifying problems in organization, logic, expression, and/or format, which of the following should happen?

Read the passage from sugar changed the world. sugar is different from honey. it offers a stronger sweet flavor, and like steel or plastic, it had to be invented. in the age of sugar, europeans bought a product made thousands of miles away that was less expensive than the honey from down the road. that was possible only because sugar set people in motion all across the world—millions of them as slaves, in chains; a few in search of their fortunes. a perfect taste made possible by the most brutal labor: that is the dark story of sugar. how does the comparison of sugar to honey reveal the authors’ purpose? it persuades readers that sugar tastes better than honey. it informs readers that there is a connection between slavery and sugar. it informs readers that honey had a major impact on society. it persuades readers that sugar is as important an invention as steel.