Correct the 4 subject verb mistakes in the text below. Jozef have been playing lead guitar with his friends for years. At first, they was all in a band together called Rattling Snakes and were quite popular. But now they is in a band called King Snake. They are not doing so well, but it is early days still. Jozef hope's one day to record a single that will make it into the charts.

Jozef has been playing lead guitar with his friends for years. At first, they were all in a band together called Rattling Snakes and were quite popular. But now they are in a band called King Snake. They are not doing so well, but it is early days still. Jozef hopes one day to record a single that will make it into the charts.

yh it is right

explanation:

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.