Another free points, i have just written this free verse please let me know what you think also if you could please think of a title im not sure about what the title should be. Best title and critique on my writing gets BRAINLIEST Untitled

It was a crude and rainy day in the world,

The earth as an entirety was thought to be going mad

People running from what they claimed to be a shadow stalking them,

Through night and through day no one could escape; was there truly nowhere safe?

People were found muttering their darkest secrets, their most evil sins, everything

They have ever done that they regret,

But one man knew; he knew the truth behind these beasts covering the world in darkness…

‘Twas not demons from down under but on the contrary demons from within, these things that all of

mankind must face; alone or together, the choice was theirs…

And so, he knew the answer to the world problem was simple, these animals could not be slayed nor

destroyed but instead you can ask them to stop; to stop you may say

But why would demons just stop hunting?

The answer is simple when a man faces the crimes, he has committed he no longer has reason to run and hide

The Demons Within is my title idea

Explanation:

A beautifully crafted verse, friend. Well done!

what are the statements xd

explanation:

the first proposition is to question economic materialism and victorian christianity. the lines are:

“it moves us not.—great god! i'd rather be

a pagan suckled in a creed outworn; ”

wordsworth is stating that nature no longer interests mankind, that the latter is not “moved” by it and explains that ancient western paganism had a more positive attitude concerning nature since it lacked the perv erted judaeo-christian interpretation of having received the world and all its animals and elements from god to use as we , instead of humans actually being not only part of nature but its wardens, meant to appreciate it and protect it.

the next lines are:

“so might i, standing on this pleasant lea,

have glimpses that would make me less forlorn;

have sight of proteus coming from the sea;

or hear old triton blow his wreathed horn.”

wordsworth here make it very clear that by actually looking and contemplating nature, human beings would reconnect with happiness, serenity and purpose. the use of mythological figures is quite evocative as well, proteus is a greek mythological god of the changing sea. he personifies the sea that changes, which symbolizes the way nature changes and inevitably can change to be destructive not only due to natural causes but to human pollution. furthermore, the sea is even more symbolic since all life originated in the sea so it is not only our past but our future since no life form in our planet can survive without water and if all water is destroyed in earth all life will be gone as well.

he then uses triton which is symbolic of the synthesis of both nature and mankind. triton is a mythological greek god that has the upper body of a man and the lower body of a fish (a merman). this human fish duality evokes the fact that humans are not only human but also part of nature, the fish tail representing nature. the main attribute of this god was that he used a conch shell as a horn to calm the roaring seas. in other words, triton uses nature through science for the benefit of human sailors who risk death during tempests. with the use of such metaphor, wordworth is conveying the message that human technology   is supposed to use nature to preserve nature and thereby humanity as well.