Read this excerpt from a student's analytical ennay, I think poetry allows Alice to communicate more effectively with the unusual citizens of the
Looking-Glass land,
2. Which is the best way to revise this sentence to give it a more formal style? (1 point)
Delete the casual phrase "I think."
Delete the word "unusual."
Revise the entire sentence,
Revise some of the word choices,

A

Explanation:

Revise the sentence below to make it more formal: 'You're going to get really fat if you ... C. when the person or thing performing the action is a proper noun ... Provide additional support for the topic sentence, and revise the whole paragraph ..

none because there is no words that describe a noun and give a mood

subject: why anyone can be a genius.

occasion: moving forward in life.

audience: average person

purpose: to push you further in life

speaker: many famous geniuses.

here is the poem:

here is thy, and here is thee, genius is for what he can be.

poem is a matter of rhyme, but like ben frank said, life is a matter of time.

we have great inventors such as thomas edison, who said, "genius is one percent inspiration and 99% perspiration." no, no perspiration as what comes from your skeleton.

we have great minds, from places of all kinds, such as yu kaw la chi tie, (now im switching languages because yu kaw was japanese.)

てちハラスイヒイス, てちラスイヒイス

てちのちみスイヒイス.

you are a genius, well not yet, but you are capable, and that is a bet.