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English, 04.10.2020 09:01 celeste961

Which revision of the sentence best helps create a more vivid description?
When I wasn't performing at the top of my game in school, Uncle Charlie
asked me to come and work for him. At the time, I believed he was just
going to load me up with work until I discovered the value of working
hard at an assigned task.
When I wasn't doing well in school, Uncle Charlie sat down for a little talk
with me and asked me to come and work for him at his car wash. Back
then, I believed he was just going to load me up with work until I slowly
learned the true value of working hard.
When I wasn't doing well in school, Uncle Charlie asked me to come and
work for him. I thought he was just going to force me to spend long hours
on my feet toiling away with a scrub brush and bucket of soapy water
until I learned the value of working hard.
When I wasn't performing at the top of my game in school, Uncle Charlie
asked me to come and work for him-at his car wash. I thought he was just
going to assign me immense amounts of work until I eventually realized

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