What connections exist between Odysseus and the real-world people that you have read about?

Which sentence should be revised to include vivid imagery

Iopened the door quietly, then stood in the doorway rewrite using ..ing participle

What is the problem with the following sentence: cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.