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English, 27.09.2020 21:01 dontcareanyonemo

1. Jamie and Jeremy are my next door neighbors. 2. They are brother and sister. 3. Everyday, myself walks to school with them. What problem needs to be fixed in Dorthea’s narrative?

Dorthea should identify herself as a character in her narrative.
The pronoun “they” should be replaced with the pronoun “we.”
In sentence 3, Dorthea should identify herself with a different pronoun.
The word “Everyday” should be removed from the beginning of sentence 3

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