Read Sherise's brainstorming table. Beginning
Middle
End
I had outgrown the desk in I found a cool design for a After three weeks of
my bedroom, my legs homemade desk on the construction, my dad and
could barely fit under it Internet and convinced my had successfully built the
dad to help me build it. perfect desk
Which sentence would best resolve this series of events in a descriptive narrative?
O I love stretching my legs in the roomy space under the desk that my dad and I built.
O I could not concentrate on my homework because my legs were in a tight tangle under the desk.
Finally, the desk was put together!
O I learned a lot about building.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

what is the underlined word ?

by giving an example of how mary beth tinker did, in fact, disrupt her mathematics class

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