During a global review of the following first four sentences of a supporting paragraph in an essay, what would you identify as the main problem?
Raising children might be the most difficult job in the
world. They're cute and cuddly and lots of fun to play with.
In addition, they keep their parents feeling young and
energetic. It might also be noted that they bring a lot of joy
into a home.
A. There are many spelling errors.
B. The topic sentence does not fit with the supporting sentences that
follow it.
C. The second supporting example is not interesting enough
D. The supporting sentences are badly written