Which of the following excerpts most effectively uses imagery? The hot sand made the Jones family quicken their pace to get to the cool ocean water. They set up their multicolored beach umbrella to
shield them from the sun's beating rays. The sand close to the water was much cooler and felt wonderful on their feet. The children
splashed in the cool ocean water, and they hardly noticed that it was 90 degrees outside.
The Jones family went to the beach for vacation. It was hot, but the ocean felt good. They enjoyed themselves.
The Jones family went to the beach. They had so much fun. They played in the sand and splashed in the ocean.
The Jones family vacationed in Tulum, Mexico. The beach was hot, and the water was cool and full of sea life.

The first extract

Explanation:

The first extract demonstrates more effective imagery as it is very descriptive and allows the reader to really know what the Jones Family is seeing and feeling.

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