Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. you may need to create additional details or information. use proper spelling and grammar.

ashley wanted a puppy. he talked to his family for hours. they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. ashley created a puppy-care plan. his family finally agreed.

The following temporal transition words/phrases are in bold and underlined.

At first, Ashley wanted a puppy, so he talked to his family for hours, except they did not believe he had time to care for the puppy. Therefore, Ashley created a puppy-care plan. Eventually, his family finally agreed.

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explanation:

there are number of topics. you can pick any one of these topics: