2.1 You are A. R.Aggarwal, General Manager, Aggarwal Enterprises, Indore. You need various items of furniture and stationery for your newly constructed head-office. Write a letter to
Modern Official Works, Indore placing a bulk order for the supply giving all the details of
the items ordered.
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Explanation:

To

The Officer/Manager

Modern Official Works, Indore

Respected Sir

I would like to state that I want to place order for various furniture items and stationery item from your firm for my newly constructed office in Indore.

The item are :

1. Office chairs --- 10 Nos

2. Tables (6 feet by 4 feet)  --- 5

3.Tables (4 feet by three feet ) --- 7

3. Shelves (7 feet by 4 feet) --- 4

4. Office files --- 20 Nos

5. Writing pads  --- 100 Nos

6. Pens -- 100  Nos

The above item would be delivered at my office in Indore from your end. The payment would be done by cheque mode.

Thanking You

A.R.Aggarwal, General Manager,

Aggarwal Enterprises, Indore.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p