Grammar check and make any changes necessary from this paragraph: War Horse is plotted in provincial England and France during the First-World-War. It begins with a unique bond between a little pony called Joey and a youthful man called Albert, who tames and raises him to be a farm horse. When they are separated, the novel follows the remarkable journey of the horse as he moves through the war, transforming the lives of those he meets, the British battalions, German soldiers, a French farmer and his granddaughter named “Emilie. The novel arrives at its most emotional moment in the story, Joey discovering himself injured and alone in “No-man’s-land,” he is found by the British and is taken to their vet canvas. There, Joey is reunited with Albert, who has enlisted in the military as a veterinarian to find Joey. Albert nurses Joey back to shape. The war finishes. However, they placed Joey up for auction, but Emilie’s Grandpa shows up and wins the auction for Joey. Emilie has died, so Emilie’s Grandpa gives Joey to Albert. Albert takes Joey back to England, married his beloved Maisie Brown, and they lived harmoniously together.

A war horse is plotted in provincial England and France during the First-World-War. It begins with a unique bond between a little pony called Joey and a youthful man named Albert, who tames and raises Joey to be a farm horse. When they desperate, the novel follows the remarkable journey of the horse as he moves through the war, transforming the lives of those he meets. The British battalions, German soldiers, a French farmer and his granddaughter named “Emilie”. The novel arrives at its most emotional moment in the story. Joey discovers himself injured and alone in “No-man’s-land,” he is found by the British and is taken to their vet canvas. There, Joey is reunited with Albert, who has enlisted in the military as a veterinarian to find Joey. Albert nurses Joey back to shape. After the war finishes However, they place Joey up for auction. Thankfully, Emilie’s grandpa shows up and wins the auction for Joey. Emilie has died, and Emilie’s grandpa gives Joey back to Albert. After Albert takes Joey back to England, he marries his beloved Maisie Brown, and they live harmoniously together.

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One of the kids who came to the farm from Birmingham, a boy called Billy, the teachers warned me that he had a stammer and told me not to ask him direct questions because it would terrify him if he had to be made to speak because he doesn’t speak...I came in the last evening into the yard behind this big Victorian house where they all live, and there he was, Billy, standing in his slippers by the stable door and the lantern above his head, talking. Talking, talking, talking, to the horse. And the horse, Hebe, had her head just over the top of the stable, and she was listening; that’s what I noticed, that the ears were going, and I knew she knew that she had to stay there whilst this went on, because this kid wanted to talk, and the horse wanted to listen—this was a two way thing...I went and got the teachers, and brought them up through the vegetable garden, and we stood there in the shadows, and we listened to Billy talking, and they were completely amazed how this child who couldn’t get a word out—the words were simply flowing. All the fear had gone, and there was something about the intimacy of this relationship, the trust building up between boy and horse, that I found enormously moving, and I thought: Well yes, you could write a story about the First World War through the eyes of a horse, and yes, the horse didn't understand every word, but she knew it was important for her to stand there and be there for this child.

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this is the answer , p = 1 + (1/10)x

step-by-step explanation:

we have,

at sea level pressure is 1 atmosphere (i.e at x =0, p0=1 atmosphere)

at depth 23 meters , pressure = 3.3 atmosphere

since the pressure increases at constant rate as the depth increases, so we can write a relation as:

p =p0 +   kx   , where p is the pressure  , p0 is the initial pressure, x is the depth and k is constant rate of increasing.

to find constant rate k, plug p = 3.3 , p0 = 1 and x= 23 meters

we get,

  3.3 = 1 + k * 23

k = 2.3 / 23   = 1/10

so we can write the function formula as:   p = 1 + (1/10)x