What type of behavior is the government controlling? The government is controlling the behavior of people who have freedom. They are also controlling the conduct of individuals who have opportunity. In which the citizens' of the society live in are strictly controlled by the government - the government decides where they live, where they work, who they care about and even when they die (all citizens die at the age of 80). - i have that do i need to add or take away anything to make it better please help and criticize i need a good grade on this

Everything looks good. Just fix citizens' to citizens. And take out even but keep the when you die.

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There you go!

quite an interesting way to teach topic sentences, because the answer to this question is the best definition of a topic sentence that one can present, it is as if answering the questions taught you how to do it, this is some real teaching, it is terribly well-done.

the topic sentence in this paragraph is:

topic sentences writers stay on track and keep a paragraph from becoming an aimless collection of sentences about an idea.

which incidentally tells you what a topic sentence should be.

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