Help please lol, I’m bad at English

A. Sentence 1.

Explanation:

In the given paragraph, the sentence that contains an error is Sentence 1. Sentence 1 is structurally not correct. The first sentence of the paragraph begins with a modifying phrase. A modifying phrase is used to modify or clarify the closet noun, adverb, verb, etc. But the list of modifiers are not modifying the closet noun, that is 'the animal shelter' instead it modifies the work that's been done in an animal shelter.

So, Sentence 1 consists of a structural error. Therefore, option A is correct answer.

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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