Read the paraphrase of the story Henrique wrote. The soldiers walked through the rain as they approached the
canyon. They'd been traveling for days to reach the dragon's
lair. Finally they arrived. Then the dragon approached, and it
roared. Yet, the soldiers faced off with the dragon, despite
the noise.
Which is the best critique explaining why Henrique should
revise the paraphrase?

Which word in the passage the reader determine the meaning of the word miscarriage? toilattracteddicgraced

What do the excerpts have in common? both point out the tragic nature of situations in which children make journeys without their parents. both describe what immigrant children must do to survive when traveling to the united states. both explain why most children want to leave central america without their parents. both indicate the tragic problems and their consequences that children in central america must face.

Which traits are strongest in your persuasive essay: ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, or conventions?