English, 02.07.2020 01:01 Yuii

"Mark took a long look around his room. He looked at all the baseball cards he collected. He looked at the action figures he used to play with. He looked at the posters on the wall. He looked at the bed that seems far too small now. He looked out the window at the park where he used to play baseball. It all looked so small now." What is the issue
with this creative writing?
A. There are no issues
B. It lacks a variety of sentence structure
C. It needs to be proofread
D. It is full of clichés
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