The Human Resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop led by Joseph Pelletier. He has 20 years of experience in career development training and will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals he will also discuss tools to work toward your career goals. The workshop will take place November 10 and 11, and it will start at 9:30 a. m. and end at 5:30 p. m., and there will be coffee and tea in the morning lunch will be provided in the afternoon. Respond to this e-mail to sign up because only 40 spaces are available. How could you improve this message? check all that apply.

a. Correct comma splices.
b. Do not use simple sentences.
c. Increase sentence lengths.
d. Vary sentence types.
e. Correct fragments.

The correct options are D and E      

Explanation:

To explain option D, please note that sentences are classified according to their purpose. The 4 most common types are

The author of the message used declarative sentences a lot. Some of them have been modified. Please see 4, 5 and 6 below.

The sentence is reconstructed below using some of the options above and more to improve the readability of the message.

The Human Resources department is happy to announce a career development workshop led by Joseph Pelletier. He has 20 years of experience in career development training and will help you gain a clearer understanding of your career goals. (1)

(2) During the training, Pelletier (3) will also discuss tools that will help you work toward your career goals. The workshop is scheduled  (4) take place November 10 and 11, and it will start at 9:30 a.m. and end at 5:30 p.m.. (5) We have made provision for coffee and tea to be served in the morning,  and lunch will be provided in the afternoon. (6) You are encouraged to sign up as soon as you can as there are only 40 spaces are available.

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there are several different forms of presenting this; each has a very specific format. plays have a very simple format; teleplays, for television shows, or screenplays, for movies, have more complex and strict rules for formatting.

drama

the first of these to be written for the express purpose of being performed were created by the greeks. many of our modern terms derive from greek origins.

comedy

in the greek sense, a play that doesn't end in death. in modern usage, refers to a play that is humorous.

tragedy

in the greek sense, a play that ends with the death of at least one of the main characters. in modern usage, refers to a play that doesn't have a happy ending.

wallop

to hot or strike with a hand blow

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