1My apartment is not a good place to live. 2First of all, my apartment is old and run-down. 3For example, the kitchen stove and refrigerator are often out of order. 4The sink has a leaky faucet, and the linoleum is old and cracked. 5The walls in all the rooms need paint, and the carpets need to be replaced. 6Worst of all, there is no air conditioning in the summer, and the furnace does not work in the winter. 7As a result, in the summer the rooms are hot, and in the winter the rooms are cold. 8For another thing, my apartment building is always noisy. 9I live next to the shopping center with stores and restaurants. 10There is often loud music in the restaurants, and people drink beer and sing songs until 1:00 or 2:00 in the morning. 11My neighbors upstairs are also noisy. 12They argue all the time and do not go to bed until 2.00 or 3:00 in the morning. 13My family and I are very unhappy in this apartment and want to move as soon as possible. - Topic sentence: My apartment is not good place to live

- Reason 1: First of all, my apartment is old and run-down

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