Revise the following paragraph to enhance its coherence of thought.

I went out for the track team. I worked out in my backyard. I wasn't ready. I decided to quit within a few weeks. My
coach noticed my attitude. Some jump. He told me to get up and try again. I soon realized the importance of hard
work.

Parla you studied both a video analysis and text analysis of the poem "i hear america singing." consider how the speaker of the poem describes america as "singing. nrite a paragraph discussing the central theme of the poem, drawing information from both the video and the text. cite specific evidence from the video and text to support analysis

Read the excerpt from the odyssey then his chores being all dispatched she caught another brace of man to make his breakfast and whisk away his great door slab to let his sheep go through but he behind reset the stones as one would cap a quiver what two things are being compared in this epic simile

In the following sentence which word is abstract noun quincy insisted that each one of his teammate members demonstrate loyalty members team quincys loyalty