Revise the sentence to state the meaning in fewer words. Avoid passive voice, needless repetition, and wordy phrases and clauses.
In the not too distant future, college freshmen must all become aware of the fact that there is a need for them to make contact with an
academic adviser concerning the matter of a major.
a. When choosing a major, college freshmen will soon need to become more aware that they need to work
with their advisors.
b. In the near future, college students will need to become more attuned to the fact that they need to consult
with their advisors when choosing their majors.
C. College freshmen will soon need to realize that they need to work with an academic advisor in choosing a
major.
d. Soon college freshmen must realize that they need to contact their advisors about their choices of majors.
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How can the passage best be revised to eliminate logical fallacies and improve clarity
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What point of view is expressed by judith sargent murray in her essay "on the equality of the sexes"? a- that men would benefit from women learning more about taking care of their homes b- that women's lives would be enriched if they had access to further education c- that children would progress further in school if their mothers studied with them d-that society would be more accepting of women who attended school
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