Which sentence from a personal narrative requires a grammar revision?
A. Finally, when my freckled skin started to pucker with goose bumps
and my lips turned blue, we dragged ourselves out of the surf and up
to shore and fell shivering on our blanket.
B. When the sun became too hot, we ran back into the crystal blue water
and surf again until we are exhausted.
C. Later, as brilliant oranges and pinks brushed the western sky, we
gathered driftwood to build a fire and warm our chilled bones.
D. The hot dogs sizzled on our broken sticks as we held them in the
flames and realized we had never felt so hungry.

The answer should be d.

What are you asking

First when sexton says; "a thousand doors ago" in the poem "young" she uses a hyperbole, an extreme exaggeration, to explain what time in her life she is talking about. next sexton says; "the wise stars bedding over me" in the poem "young" she uses personification, gives human characteristics to  non-humans, to explain that she is outside at night, with the stars above her. third sexton says; "the boards on the house were smooth and white as wax"  in the poem "young" she uses  imagery, concrete or abstract images that  appeal  to the scenes, to show that the boards on the house were smooth. and she uses a simile when she says "white as wax" which means she used like or as to compare two subjects. in this line she compares the color white and wax to explain further what color the house was.