Study the picture given below. Write a short story or description or an account of what the picture suggests to you, Your composition may be about the subject of the picture or you may take suggestions from it.

Word Limit: 350-400 words

Explanation:

This picture gives be a sense of calm before the storm . It has that sense of serenity that can only come before a major change. Like in a story where everything is going right for the main character then something devastating happens. With the darkness in the photo coming in and covering the light.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

the patriots are