Read the sentence from the draft.

Another argument, which is one often cited by parents, is the concern that children spend too much time on social media, talking long into the night with friends and losing sleep.

What is the best way to revise the sentence to reduce wordiness?

A.
Another argument parents often make is that children spend too much time on social media.
B.
Another argument is that children use social media to talk hour after hour, day after day to friends.
C.
Another argument parents make over and over again is the issue of how much time their children spend on social media.
D.
Another argument is about time on social media because children talk too much and too late.

D. Another argument is about time on social media because children talk too much and too late.

Explanation: children would get some rest and not stay up late otherwise it's not good for their eyes they would rather take a break of no electronics.

answer: no

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