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The first three points are what they (the cats) are related to, how they seem to act, and how they are throughout the story. These points will help explain the differences in the story. In "The Golden Cat" the cat is related to the sun, but in "The Cat and The Moon" the cat is being compared to the moon.

The cat in "the golden cat" acts like the sun because he watches over people. The cat in "the cat and the moon" does not seem to care as much about people, similar to how the moon feels to some people.The line "he makes the fields and meadows purr" in "the golden cat" describes the cat is wonderful. The cat in the "cat and the moon" is described as being scared. This can be seen in the lines "the pure cold light in the sky trouble his animal blood. Minnaloushe runs in the grass."

There are two more points on the differences. The cat in the "golden cat" acts domestic, but the other cats in the cat and the moon act absolutely different.

Explanation:

Best way to edi was to rewrite the sentences for you. hope this helps.

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

people wont do this for 10 points you need at least 50