Please make these sentences clear, and correct. Also, be creative! Worth a lot of points and will mark brainliest!

SENTENCES: The ball game was important to the Maya because it allowed them to express their religious beliefs and practices. The Mayan people believed that through the game, they were able to survive. In some ways, the game allowed for the sun to shine, which in turn allowed for the people to harvest crops and get food. Without the game, the Mayan people believed that they would die.

The sentences seem grammatically correct and clear to me, the most I could do is add same extra words? Is there something else that you had specifically in mind?

The ball game was very important to the Maya because with it, they were allowed to freely express themselves and their religious beliefs and practices. The Mayan people believed that through the game they were able to survive daily. To them it seemed as if in some ways, the game had allowed for the sun to shine, which in turn allowed for the people to harvest crops and get food. This was a huge part of their lives and they felt that without the game, they would die.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.