Jeremy wrote an essay supporting having pizza in the cafeteria. Then he found information showing that some types of pizza are unhealthy.
His first essay stated, "Our school should serve pizza in the cafeteria every day. Pizza is delicious, and kids love to eat it. Right now, many students do not finish their lunches because they do not like the food that is served. They throw their lunches away, which is wasteful. Pizza is a good food that kids will eat.”
His second essay states, "Our school should offer pizza for lunch every day. This will keep students from having to buy food they do not like and then throwing it away. Some kinds of pizza are unhealthy, but the school could offer healthy toppings such as fresh veggies.”
Which statement best describes the difference between Jeremy’s first and second essays?

Which sentence is an example of objective third person writing that could be found in a scientific essay

Read the excerpt from "home front diary." jimmy simmons stopped by today to tell me that he had enlisted in the army. he asked me if i would write to him, and i said i would. i told him that i've been writing to my uncle arthur and susan's cousin john for about a year, and as an experienced correspondent i had some advice about all the censorship. "don't write down any information about your location or the number of soldiers in your unit because the censors will cut all of that away," i said. "in my experience, loose lips not only sink ships, they make letters look like snowflake decorations! ” well, he belly laughed over that one. how is the author's perspective different from jimmy's? the author has been to war and she can give jimmy advice. jimmy has become a soldier and does not believe the author’s advice. the author has experience writing to soldiers but jimmy does not. jimmy has more experience at letter writing than the author.

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