Can someone please help

I wrote this paragraph in a short answer format

Explanation:

  There are many people in the world who deserve generous gifts, especially during this crisis. Real life heroes, such as: nurses, surgeons, scientists, and food delivery workers, risk their health and sometimes their lives to save others. One particular type of person I would choose to give thanks to is Doctors. I believe that doctors deserve a thanks for their dangerous help, possibly in the form of wealth.

  While scientists work their hardest to cease the spread of the virus, Doctors and nurses do the immediate most for the people who are suffering and struggling because of the outbreak.(( As said in Newsweeks.com "The novel corona virus has killed over 100 doctors and nurses around the world. nearly half of whom are reported in Italy." ) You may want to use a quote from a different source if your teacher has provided web links to do so)The sheer fact that doctors continue to work on treatment is beyond selfless and respectable. They are fighting something huge and unknown, a reality that none of us want to address. The most any citizen can to to help them is to stay home and stop the spread.  

  The number of deaths continues to increase as time goes on. For their troubles I would want to gift stable wealth to all that have participated in fighting the virus.

This is only a base answer, I recommend adding more supporting details for the best grade possible. Hope this helps!

different strategies reach different people based on their ability to understand the material. (from personal experience) when writing an argumentative essay write explaining the subject as though your audience never heard of it before and it is just being introduced, then explain why other people hate it also, afterward you would explain why that would be wrong. i hope that : )