115. Salcie!
From: MUSTAMAZI
To: Mandy Marig
Subject: Re: Your dau
Why does Mandy's dad write So
there, Mrs. Sanchez?
escribe Denali pa
HINT?
No, this isn't why Mandy's dad writes
this. Make sure you remind yourself of
what Mrs. Sanchez would say about
descriptions, and then try again.
Howdy, Penguin!
Where I'm staying in
stream is as cold as i
I'm as happy as a cla
So there, Mrs. Sanch
But seriously, Denali
cool, clean scent of:
soil. Birds singing wi
night, the howlingo
it or not, the sound
The lodge is coming
the northern lights
just not the right tir
later in the month.
He's still using rodeos to describe Denali Park.
» He writes about water in all his descriptions of Denali Park.
» He's using more overused similes to describe Denali Park.