The writer is considering changing the method of development used in sentences 4 and 5 (reproduced below) to provide a clearer line of reasoning for the audience.

The discovery was remarkable not only because of the cheese’s age and well-preserved state, but because of a new protein analysis performed on the cheese by chemist Enrico Greco at the University of Catania in Italy. This cutting-edge analysis allowed Dr. Greco to unlock the cheese’s contents and reveal new insights into life in ancient Egypt.

Should the writer use a different method of development in sentences 4 and 5 ?

(1) one of the most popular festivals in southeast asia is diwali, the hindu festival of lights. (2) diwali means “row of lights.” (3) several legends claim that the festival was created to celebrate the homecoming of lord rama after more than 14 years of exile. (4) after lord rama defeated the demon ravana, the people placed small lanterns outside of their houses to light their leader’s way home. (5) today, the festival honors many different gods and traditions. (6) most people view diwali as a celebration of hope and a time to remember that good will always overcome evil. (7) people celebrate the five-day festival with an abundance of lights, fireworks, food, and music. (8) many families also pay their respects to different gods by building small altars in their homes. jordan has decided that moving sentence 4 before sentence 3 will improve the organization of the report. is jordan correct in her revision? a) yes, because the revision explains why rama was exiled b) no, the revision disrupts the logical order of the report c) no, the revision moves the answer away from the posed question eliminate d) yes, the revision improves the chronological order of the report