Only a very small handfull of students in the third grade own a cell phone that they actually bring to school. Some people beleive that third grade is too young to own a cell phone, but I dissagree. As long as the student keeps the cell phone on silent or off during the school day, cell phones should not be a problem for teachers. In our time, even third graders need phones to call they're parents to come pick them up early if an after-school activitiy is cancelled. They also can help a parent and child both feel saffer about keeping in constant communication. Cell phones keep getting cheaper, and parents can put all sorts of parental limmits on cell phones if they want to. I believe that cell phones are hear to stay. If you were editing this paragraph using a rubric, in which area would this paragraph need the most improvement? A) misspelled words B) grammatical errors C) incorrect punctuation D) poor sentence structure

A

Explanation: because there are multiple misspelled words in the question

B) grammatical errors

Explanation:

it has many spelling errors, misused words, and not needed words (not A because it has more then just misspelled word)

- handfull- handful

- take out actually

- beleive- believe

- dissagree- disagree

- they're- their

- come- come to (needed a participle)

- activitiy- activity

- cancelled- canceled

-saffer- safer

-limmits- limits

-hear-  here

paine is arguying that they had tried everything before coming to the conclusion that they needed to fight for their freedom.

argument: "every quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual."

claim 1: "our prayers have been rejected with disdain; and only tended to convince us, that nothing flatters vanity, or confirms obstinacy in kings more than repeated petitioning and nothing hath contributed more than that very measure to make the kings of europe absolute."

claim 2: "wherefore, since nothing but blows will do, for god’s sake, let us come to a final separation, and not leave the next generation to be cutting throats, under the violated unmeaning names of parent and child."

a) why did you buy only one bunch of bananas ? it's not enough for the party .

b) can i have a carton of juice, ? it looks very fresh !

c) a kilo of milk ? that's 2 pounds, .

d) i've got only one bar of chocolate . you can have a half of it .

e) cut just a small slice of cheese for me . i'm trying to lose weight .

f) do you want a bowl of soup ? it's delicious !

g) can i have a tin of biscuits, ?

h) do you want a loaf of bread ? i bought three .

i) let's buy a glass of wine to celebrate our wedding anniversary !

j) don't leave the jar of honey on the table . the kids will break it .

k) we need to buy some sweets and a bottle of coke .

l) would you like a cup of hot tea ? you've got a cold !

m) can i have a piece of chocolate cake, ? it's my favourite dessert .

n) i bought a beautiful packet of flowers for my mum's birthday .

hope this !