Which revision corrects the inappropriate shift in verb mood?
Have you ever tried kayaking? You could explore local
streams and lakes. Or you could take your kayak out on the
open ocean. You are paddling along with the breeze in your
hair. You might want to do some fishing from your kayak.
One thing is for sure: You wouldn't want to forget your
flotation device!
A. You paddled along with the breeze in your hair.
O
B. You would paddle along with the breeze in your hair.
O
C. Is the breeze blowing your hair while you paddle?
O
D. Paddling along, you feel the breeze in your hair.

Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. ‘you make me feel uncivilized, daisy,’ i confessed on my second glass of corky but rather impressive claret. ‘can’t you talk about crops or something? ’ i meant nothing in particular by this remark but it was taken up in an unexpected way. ‘civilization’s going to pieces,’ broke out tom violently. ‘i’ve gotten to be a terrible pessimist about things. have you read ‘the rise of the coloured empires’ by this man goddard? ’ ‘why, no,’ i answered, rather surprised by his tone. ‘well, it’s a fine book, and everybody ought to read it. the idea is if we don’t look out the white race will be—will be utterly submerged. it’s all scientific stuff; it’s been proved.’ in this passage, tom’s ideas about race relations come off as uncivilized. what literary device is fitzgerald using here? irony personification metaphor simile