Which is the BEST way to revise the
sentence labeled 15?

A) Not having received worldwide fame for
their achievements, these inventors'
creations certainly have improved the lives
of many people.

B) For their achievements, these inventors
may not have received worldwide fame, but
their creations certainly improving the lives
of many people.

C) These inventors may not have received
worldwide fame for their achievements, but
their creations certainly have improved the
lives of many people.

D) These inventors may not have received
worldwide fame, but their creations
certainly have improved the lives of many
people, for their achievements,

Not having received worldwide fame for their achievement, these inventors creation certainly have improved the lives of the many people

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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