Which revision is the best example of adding concrete
details?
Schaffer told another person in his office to sound the
wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication
during the Chicago fire.
Schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box
and that caused a miscommunication during the massive
Chicago fire of 1871
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box
342 instead of the correct box and that caused a
miscommunication during a fire in Chicago.
Schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm Box
342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an
incorrect location during the Chicago fire of 1871.
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What else do you think experts can learn from studying the language of written work? what do you think is the value of studying the language of william shakespeare whose writing is over hundreds of years old?

Read this excerpt from rudolfo anaya’s essay “take the tortillas out of your poetry.”tortillas and poetry. they go hand in hand. books nourish the spirit, bread nourishes our bodies. our distinct cultures nourish each one of us, and as we know more and more about the art and literature of the different cultures, we become freer and freer. . i don’t know anyone who doesn’t like to sample different ethnic foods, the breads of many many groups; just as many of us enjoy sampling books from different areas of the world. i travel to foreign countries, and i know more about myself as i learn more about my fellow human beings. censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and that activity can be justified by no one. which of these changes would make this excerpt more argumentative? using words that affect the audience’s sense of trustusing less repetition of certain words and phrasesincluding words that address logic and reasonincluding words that are charged with emotion

How does the author support the claim that ordinary and digital mail are very different?