6.Edit the journal entry below

I try to be polite, although many people are not. Whenever i do not do it for attention, I think other people notice this about me. My younger cousin isn't always polite when I remind him, because I think it doesn't make a difference anymore, I will continue to be polite because other people are not always polite, that doesn't mean I should stop.

Sentence 1 I try to be polite, although many people are not.

A. No change
B. I try to be polite, unless many people are not.
C. I try to be polite although, many people are not
D. I try to be polite although many people are not?

the correct answer is the first one.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

well, there are online sites that can make it look like a texting screenshot, so u can make it like hamilton texting jefferson through that, and he can start with him being like, i know it's out of the blue, but blah blah blah

you have so far written an informative essay (if you haven't then you might want to do that. look back at the lesson for guidance) answer the question but is it the best conclusion it can be? does it properly summarize the main subtopics of your essay? does it state in one or two sentences the “so what” of your topic. if your topic was abraham lincoln, your essay shouldn’t be just about abraham lincoln. it should answer, “so what about abraham lincoln? ”

revise your conclusion

hope this you!