Imagine that this is an e-mail you are getting ready to send. Because this message is business related, you know you
should review it before you hit "send." Review all elements of the e-mail. Aside from needed proofreading,
which statement reflects the best way to improve this e-mail?
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A subject line should always be included.
It is fine to leave the subject line blank when your topic is general
The e-mail is correct and appropriate to send as it is.
You should always CC a colleague.
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because it's a cool name

explanation:

1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

you're welcome ; p