Heugenogs are so cute. I
love looking at pictures of
them! They can carry diseases
that humans can get. They are
nocturnal, so they will be
asleep most of the day. They
also squeak and grunt.
The writer wants to focus on important
facts and details.
YOUR MISSION: Identify the sentences that are inappropriate for this
paragraph.

At the beginning the H is capital. The construction of the sentences is not correct. I love them, however they can carry diseases

If you want to add only facts, maybe personal opinion for example I love them is not necessary.

glamis thou art, and cawdor; and shalt be what thou art promis'd; yet do i fear thy nature; it is too full o' the milk of human kindness to catch the nearest way: thou wouldst be great; art not without ambition; but without the illness should attend it. what thou wouldst highly, that wouldst thou holily; wouldst not play false, and yet wouldst wrongly win: thou'dst have, great glamis, that which cries, "thus thou must do, if thou have it: and that which rather thou dost fear to do than wishest should be undone." hie thee hither, that i may pour my spirits in thine ear; and chastise with the valor of my tongue all that impedes thee from the golden round, which fate and metaphysical aid doth seem to have thee crown'd withal.  

he lacks ambition.  

he is hesitant.  

he lacks courage.  

he has moral scruples.

the answer should be:

the intervention of the supernatural gives gilgamesh hope that he will defeat humbaba.